25.6 - Black Mountain Cento: the sky moving in a pulse
the subtle birdsingle smatter of rainI have seen animals break in twothe darkest red in the center--all voices and scenes come backsixty-two, sixty-three, I most remember,but in the streams sudden...
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Wow! So much going on in this little poem. Favorite lines: I have seen animals break in two the darkest red in the center-- and contention was our only bone, but you've woven all together so...
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Oh what fun. And a very good poem, too. I was also struck by these lines that Greta pulled out: I have seen animals break in two the darkest red in the center-- But other parts I also liked,...
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I like this a lot: contention was our only bone, Oooooh to: the sun/of all fear
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You've blended these borrowed lines so well!I have to love,"I have seen animals break in two the darkest red in the center--"
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"The subtle bird" makes me think of "the obscure bird"--Macbeth again. Why am I preoccupied with Macbeth? Like the close lots, too, and the way this one sounds read aloud. It would, in fact, be a...
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